Sunday, 29 September 2013

the free fall....

......& he was in free fall!

He prepared to meet death! 
Wind rushed past his ears;
His heart thudded against his chest wall;
He waited for an immense pain to end it all.
A massive jerk......

He was no longer falling,
He opened his eyes,
The land lay far beneath.......

The parachute had indeed opened!

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda

This post belongs to the 55-word fiction genre!


  1. Seems we had similar ideas :) well...great brains do think alike. Happy to share my liebster award wih you :). Did leave a comment on another post. Not sure it got published. Do take a look at my liebster post :)

    1. hi Preethi, your link is not working. please do post me a correct link, would love to read your award winning post myself!! :) and where did you leave a post, missed it out maybe!! will check again!!

  2. I have read yours and preethi's, similar jumps, but nice narration. Good.