5.....4.....3.....2.....1
jump..
......& he was in free fall!
He prepared to meet death!
Wind rushed past his ears;
His heart thudded against his chest wall;
He waited for an immense pain to end it all.
Then,
A massive jerk......
He was no longer falling,
He opened his eyes,
The land lay far beneath.......
The parachute had indeed opened!
jump..
......& he was in free fall!
He prepared to meet death!
Wind rushed past his ears;
His heart thudded against his chest wall;
He waited for an immense pain to end it all.
Then,
A massive jerk......
He was no longer falling,
He opened his eyes,
The land lay far beneath.......
The parachute had indeed opened!
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This post belongs to the 55-word fiction genre!
Seems we had similar ideas :) well...great brains do think alike. Happy to share my liebster award wih you :). Did leave a comment on another post. Not sure it got published. Do take a look at my liebster post http://abitofthisandtat.blogspot.in/2013/09/that-wonderful-feeling-of-being.html?m=1 :)
ReplyDeletehi Preethi, your link is not working. please do post me a correct link, would love to read your award winning post myself!! :) and where did you leave a post, missed it out maybe!! will check again!!
DeleteI have read yours and preethi's, similar jumps, but nice narration. Good.
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